describing
shit happens
This story happened 7 months ago. My boyfriend
and I booked the hotel for short holidays. It was located in Amsterdam, just a
couple of minutes walk from the city center. When we arrived at the hotel we were
taken to our room by a member of the staff. When he opened the door to our room, I
could notice an unpleasant smell coming from the bathroom.I was curious to know what the smell was so I asked my boyfriend to go to check what the smell was. When he opened the door, I heard water dripping from the tap and smelt poops so I ran to the bathroom. When I got to the door,I saw that there were poops on the floor.
I accidentally touched a piece of poop by standing on it. The thought of the poop touching my foot made me vomit. The only good thing from the bathroom was the toothpaste that made my mouth taste fresh again. After brushing my teeth, we decided to leave to find a better hotel and of course, I didn’t forget to steal the toothpaste.
Aww ! I think I am not going to have dinner because of your writing. Anyway I give you 10 points because you can describe and made me imagine clearly about the poops.
ตอบลบOh gosh! i like your story and i believe that no one wrote it like you. Your point 10
ตอบลบEwwww ! After I read your writing, I smell like there are poops around me. Your writing is so wried but funny in the same time. So I give you 10 points.
ตอบลบLOL! Your story is very funny. I feel like I be there with you from reading your work. I give 10.
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