Describe Place (Reduced clauses)
Gaomei Wetlands
Anyone
looking for an
awesome peaceful place to relax in Taichung, Taiwan should visit a place called Gaomei Wetlands. It’s
a place where sea and land meet. There is an elegant boardwalk 800 meters long making easy for everyone
to access the wetland. While you are walking along the walkway surrounded by delicate environment,
you’ll see little creatures, such as fiddler crabs, mud skippers and lots of
birds. So Gaomei Wetlands is an excellent place for people interested in birds. It
is also an awesome place for people who want to watch the sunset. Back on land, there are many shops selling delicious grilled squid, a
local delicacy that you won't be able to stop eating it. So if you are a nature lover, a sunset lover or a squid lover who wants to relax in peaceful
place, Gaomei Wetlands might be the best place for you.

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